Thursday, July 5, 2018
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ReplyDeleteI liked the way you used your senses while you were describing your laughter poem.
ReplyDeleteDid you know that I am a year six too.
Next time, you could rhyme a poem because it would sound cool.
Why did you write a poem about laughter?
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ReplyDeleteI like how you did rainbow letters.
ReplyDeleteI also like how you said it’s like stretchy satisfying slime.
Next time you could try and add more punctuation.
Why did you choose to write about laughter?